Noun Noun Collisions 2

Really well done. The waiting patiently for the right time to reveal its internal secrets is wonderfully played. The freeform looseness being targeted to bring people together is awesome. I especially like the rhythm of this line “The rhythm of the wineglass flows in tandem with the pour”. That already seems like a song line. I actually don’t have much in the way of critique. This is really well done.

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I like the common theme of subjectivity with both the wineglass and the poem, and especially the spectrum of poetry from decanted to corked - that is a very original way of thinking about it!